Description
Leslie & Alyssa critique the opening of Aaron Hubble’s Sojourners. They discuss the importance of emphasis within a sentence, precision in language, delaying backstory, and the development of great internal and external conflict.
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Show Notes
“A good copy editor smooths over the thousand jagged edges that pull a reader out of a story.
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Want to read on? Check out the rest of Sojourners, or start with the first book in the series, Ash.
Inline Critique
