Episode 31: Sojourners, Science Fiction Critique


Leslie & Alyssa critique the opening of Aaron Hubble’s Sojourners. They discuss the importance of emphasis within a sentence, precision in language, delaying backstory, and the development of great internal and external conflict. 

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Show Notes

A good copy editor smooths over the thousand jagged edges that pull a reader out of a story.

— Mindy Klasky

Want to read on? Check out the rest of Sojourners, or start with the first book in the series, Ash.

Inline Critique