Episode Description
Leslie and Alyssa critique the first chapter of Edward Antrobus’s The Book of Fawla, a fantasy serial. They discuss telling detail for characterization, setting, and props, amping up your verbs, paying attention to diction, and how to take a story that’s working to the next level.
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Show Notes
“Editing fiction is like using your fingers to untangle the hair of someone you love.”
You can find out what happens to Kate on Edward's serial site.
Inline Critique
