Episode 43: The Book of Fawla: Fantasy Critique

Episode Description

Leslie and Alyssa critique the first chapter of Edward Antrobus’s The Book of Fawla, a fantasy serial. They discuss telling detail for characterization, setting, and props, amping up your verbs, paying attention to diction, and how to take a story that’s working to the next level.

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Show Notes

Editing fiction is like using your fingers to untangle the hair of someone you love.
— Stephanie Roberts

You can find out what happens to Kate on Edward's serial site.

Inline Critique