Episode 5: The Think Tank: Middle Grade Fantasy Short Story Critique

In this episode, Alyssa and Leslie critique an excerpt from a middle grade fantasy book, Donovan Scherer's short story, "Think Tank." They discuss: point of view/head hopping, passive voice, streamlining language for impact, echoes, strengthening verbs, and hesitant words.



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You can find Donovan Scherer's Fear & Sunshine books here. His other adventures can be found here.

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