Episode 8: Prophecy's Queen: Fantasy Novella Critique

In this episode, Leslie and Alyssa critique the opening pages from a fantasy novella in progress. They discuss information dumps, delaying back story, and revisit elaborate dialogue tags. They go on to discuss overcapitalization and why that’s a problem for your reader, and leave you with an editorial mission based on what this submission teaches us about characterization.

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You can find Timothy Bond's books here.

Inline critique