Episode 10: Ted Saves the World: Superhero YA Fantasy

In this episode, Leslie and Alyssa critique the opening pages from Bryan Cohen's Ted Saves the World, a YA superhero fantasy novel. They discuss: why this opening works so well for the story, strong opening lines, including visceral details to ground your reader, and strengthening verbs.



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