Episode 61: Behind the Stars: Fantasy Critique

Episode Description

Alyssa & Leslie critique the opening of Thomas Cardin’s Behind the Stars, an unpublished fantasy novel. They discuss conflict, point of view, echoes, and disclosing relevant detail.

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Show Notes

Editing is like walking across a room strewn with rose petals and thorns. When you can walk across mostly unbloodied, you’re finished.
— Richard Due

 

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