fantasy critique

Episode 59: Beauty's Daughter: Fantasy Novella Critique

Episode Description

Alyssa & Leslie critique the opening of Eustacia Tan’s novella Beauty’s Daughter. They discuss throat clearing, strengthening verbs, point of view, and rising tension. 



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Show Notes

Writing Tip:
Don’t let the “writing rules” bog you down when you’re writing the first draft; they don’t matter when you’re writing the story, only when you’re editing the story.
— Linda Westphal

Read the full, edited version of Beauty's Daughter here.

Revisit Eustacia's previous submission, here


Inline Critique