In this episode, Leslie and Alyssa critique the opening pages from Steeven R. Orr’s Walrus of Death. They discuss appropriate humor and how it can benefit your story, judicious pruning for a smoother reading experience, setting reader expectations with character appearance, and great hooks.
Genre: Urban Fantasy
Word Count: Approx. 18,150
Published? Not currently.
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Show Notes
“Even if your subject is a serious one, the subtle use of humor can both ease tension and provide a respite from difficult moments. I was recently hired to provide freelance assistance on a book about pornography-related problems. The authors felt I could make the subject less uncomfortable for readers by lightening things up here and there. As Eric Idle once wisely said, “Levity is the opposite of gravity.”
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Article: How to Write Better Using Humor
Book: Self-Publisher's Legal Handbook by Helen Sedwick
Article: Can You Include Song Lyrics in Your Book?
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