Episode Description
Alyssa & Leslie critique the opening of Lincoln Cole’s Raven’s Peak, and discuss tone, using secondary character reactions to develop your reader’s understanding of the protagonist, restraint in delivery, and a few finer points of comma & colon usage.
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Show Notes
“Writing is rewriting. Even after you’ve gotten an agent and an editor, you’ll have to rewrite. If you fall in love with the vision you want of your work and not your words, the rewriting will become easier.”
You can find more about the six questions we posed in today's editorial mission here.
Check out Muse Fuel and 101 Creative Writing Prompts for Memoir Writers, now available in print and ebook from Amazon.
Alyssa and Leslie were guests on the Authority Self-Publishing Podcast.
Inline Critique
