In this episode, Alyssa and Leslie critique the opening pages from High Flyer by Trudi Jaye, an as-yet-unpublished paranormal/urban fantasy novel. They discuss grounding the reader in the genre, British versus U.S. English, echoes, visceral details, and starting the story with an inciting incident.
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Show Notes
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Inline Critique
