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Alyssa Archer
June 3, 2015
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Episode 13: Once Upon a Saturn Moon: Science Fiction Critique

Alyssa Archer
June 3, 2015
Podcast

In this episode, Leslie and Alyssa critique the opening pages from Edward Antrobus's Once Upon a Saturn Moon, an as-yet unpublished science fiction adventure story. They discuss oversharing and how it relates to showing versus telling, clusters of echoes, and the difference between a series of situations and a plot. 

 

 

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Newer PostEpisode 14: Night School: Horror Critique
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