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episode description
Alyssa & Leslie critique the opening chapter of Kindar Ra Harashal’s Tristan. They discuss repetitive sentence structure, passive voice, sentence fragments, and intrigue versus melodrama.
Show Notes
“Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.”
Here's a link to the book of writing prompts we mentioned at the opening of the show. (Click on the picture)
Here's how to axe your echoes.
And here's a list of common repeat offenders to root out in your writing.
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