Episode 22: Tristan: Science Fiction/Revenge Critique

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episode description

Alyssa & Leslie critique the opening chapter of Kindar Ra Harashal’s Tristan. They discuss repetitive sentence structure, passive voice, sentence fragments, and intrigue versus melodrama.


Show Notes

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.
— Scott Adams

Here's a link to the book of writing prompts we mentioned at the opening of the show. (Click on the picture)

Here's how to axe your echoes.

And here's a list of common repeat offenders to root out in your writing.


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