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August 12, 2015
Podcast

Episode 23: Fire on the Flight Deck: Military Fiction Critique

August 12, 2015
Podcast

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Leslie & Alyssa critique the first chapter of Darren Sapp’s Fire on the Flight Deck. They discuss point of view, establishing the ordinary world, back story, and the technical details that make an unusual setting come to life. NSFW.

 

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Inline Critique

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Tagged: Military fiction

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