Leslie & Alyssa critique the first five pages of Anthony Greer’s novel The Messengers. They discuss passive voice, character engagement and sympathy, including telling (not repetitive) detail, word choice, and straying from POV. The genre is paranormal mystery.
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Show Notes
Stuff You Missed in History Class Podcast Episode for August 12.
The Billion Dollar Spy by David Hoffman
“A clear sentence is no accident.”
Writership's writing prompt books.
Inline Critique
