In this episode, Leslie and Clark critique the opening pages of Chrishaun Keller-Hanna's “Daughter of the Flood,” an as yet unpublished magical realism story. They discuss identifying characters, dialogue tags, setting, and strong verbs.
Editorial Mission: Strong Verbs
Poets don’t have the luxury of excess words to convey meaning, so prose writers can learn a lot from them about making every word count. This week, we've adapted the editorial mission from a technique used by poets (from James Tonn and Mollie Coles Tonn) to make their verbs strong. Take a five- to ten-page passage from your story and write down the verbs you use. Rate them with a one, two, or three.
· Ones are the weakest verbs, often linking verbs: to be, to have, to feel, to seem, to become.
· Twos are medium verbs like these (some of which can act like linking verbs): put, place, walk, move, head, grow, sound, remain, look, smell, taste, resemble—they are a notch above ones but don’t convey everything they could.
· Threes are strong, specific verbs: punch, saunter, creep, grab, delegate, manipulate, negotiate.
Strive for as many threes as you can manage. Leave us a comment at the bottom of the show notes or drop us a line at firstname.lastname@example.org to let us know how it goes.
Other items and resources
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